I went to the writing center this Monday during the end of the school day and found Ms. Swift for some advice that could help me with my paper. Mostly we fixed many grammar mistake that was always appear on my paper. But what truly helped me was Ms. Swift help me go over with my topic sentences for each paragraph which I got may ideas but can not put them together by using proper language and my grammar may some time made people confused. We spend about 30 minutes on my essay and my mistake was talking about the same thing again and again.
When I went to the writing center I was surprised that I was the only student there. Ms. Swift helped a lot with my logic that I used in the essay by teach me how to put those ideas together in a logic way which I was always trouble with and those mistakes I was made many times in my privet essay. Ms. Swift told me use topic sentences well could help me with my logic of the essay by following the topic sentence. I also found out that when I wrote an essay I always put my ides down while I come up with them which made my essay was full of ideas but hard to understand or read. For example I almost repeat the second paragraph by talking about the same thing again in my second to the last paragraph. So as Ms. Swift advice I choose to put those two paragraph together and came out with a nother idea for my last paragraph. The most important helped that Ms. Swift give me was the advice about the ending part which I was really need helped with. I felt like I did not know that how to conluted an essay which I use so many idea in. Ms. Swift teach me that how to organized an essay ending by put every idea down in an logic way which remind people what I was talking about in the essay.
The other problems that I had was mixing all of the stagement of my stage and the book together which makes both me and Ms. Swift confused about which line should be the common of our play and which line was the common for the book.
To conclude I felt that the writing center help me a lot this year by fixing an IB essay for me. Frankly that I never been to writing center science this year because that I feel like I do not need help form other student who was not an english teacher. But the writing center still has Ms. Swift that could helped me if I still do not want to obtian any help form those students. I think the writing center can help me to fix my confusion and come up with some ideas well.I thinking that the writing center will give more help for me by giving me adivce and helped me with my essay and more questions in the following year.a
"The irreversible Fate" Jack Shi’s Lit. And Performance Blog. N.p., 14 Nov. 2015. Web. 18 Nov. 2015.
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